Amy 2

Bad Points

>The intro could be cut down
>Unclean sound quality
>no lyrics
>boring editing
>not enough takes done in pre
>mise-en-scene
>no narrative
>none of the animation/cgi i want to include

Good Points

>lighting
>composition is okish
>synched pretty well
>one particular shot is very good and with better mise-en-scene i might use it in the cw, will have to re-shoot...
>feeling of intimacy achieved?? and of isolation as it goes on?? hope so

John

Just messing about with the software, as i didnt do any of the more complicated editing stuff last year really.

Animation1

This is really terrible, its done on my phone without a tripod, and you can ignore the last 20 seconds lol but anyway if you can imagine the underlying image as being greescreen you can see the transition would work pretty well, has a surreal quality.

amy

i have storyboards done i will post soon

prelims

ive finished my prelim stuff!! i storyboarded some angles i liked and tried those out on camera, which went pretty well... the only thing i cant do at the moment is stop gap animation, and the software still isnt ready, which is so annoying but at the same time i guess i can catch up on my crs stuff!! When the software becomes available i can finish off the practice shots i have filmed, and then start to work on the rest of my storyboards...

next up i have to storyboard the rest of the song, i think i need some sort of secondary narrative so i can mix up the locations a bit, and to work out the best way to record the audio stream is i am doing live performance. need to find locations as well grrr